My first ever poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Svenhook, Sep 22, 2008.

  1. Svenhook

    Svenhook The Mad Hatter

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    I'm not a writer by any means. But I found out some news about a past relationship that meant a lot to me and had to do something. Originally this was going to be a song, and maybe eventually i'll write a tune for it, but for now its just a poem. I figured of anywhere I could post this, this would be the most open to it, cause honestly it does kinda suck. And yes, there is a stanza written based on titles and lines from the Beatles Revolver...long story. Any who, here it is:



    Oh what an act
    You kept that hidden fact
    With hope, that lie,
    And months gone by,
    You thought it'd disappear
    But without a doubt
    The word got out
    And now its all so clear

    It's hard to look back
    On those good times we enjoyed
    For they've all turned black
    And all but been destroyed

    And now I want to tell you
    That I loved you too
    But had I known
    I may have flown.
    We could have been all done
    And these words I say
    in a special way
    Would've been for no one
     

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