A Few Poems

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by bobdylan08, Sep 24, 2008.

  1. bobdylan08

    bobdylan08 Member

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    i was born last tuesday
    when we went up
    to the mountain
    and we took our clothes off​

    we laid all of our
    fortified secrets -{and}- trembling insecurities
    for eachother to pick apart and examine

    and in the brutal architecture of the sun and the sky
    i saw the beauty of the world reflecting off of your creamy skin​

    and when i touch you my heart is fil;led wi th desir.e​

    and a thousand filthy regrets and a thousand thin hopes.
    and in the quiet heaven of your skin, your eyes
    that seem to suck the air out of my lungs
    i hold no peace but in the pounding ecstasy of my heart
    in your body,
    that shines the reluctant bliss of our bonds.​

    behind your fragile defenses
    there is a deafening stillness;
    an alleviating calm in the swirling chaos
    of our world,
    and no words can form its meaning.​

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    There’s a man at
    the end of the terminal.

    Head tilted back
    mouthing words
    and speaking only in
    silences.

    He’s got an alarm ringing
    in his pocket, but his
    interminable sleep
    endures.

    Airplanes flashing across
    the frost stained window;
    and a phone booth
    shrinking in the distance.
    White static stinging the air,
    and a lady speaks softly in
    a microphone:
    Move along;
    his disease is
    merely loneliness

    And I won’t pretend
    to understand him
    or how I, like the hours,
    change softly, ceaselessly
    painfully, and blindly
    burning through each night
    without a skinny thought
    of certainty.


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    my love for you can only be spoken in big words.
    words that roll off the tongue
    like a singing waterfall, pouring into a waking stream,
    while the sun gently climbs over the clouds.
    I feel my insides exploding
    (or taking new shape) when i touch your body.
    I like feeling your skin against mine:
    the haunting assurance of naked salvation
    when your eyes meet mine i am lost,
    words come out
    before i know what to say
    and my heart speaks louder
    than my mouth and mind
    and that’s how I know I’ll love you;
    for benefit or detriment,
    I have jumped in the stream,
    and the pull is stronger than
    any will I possess.
    and if the power lines of
    communication are snipped
    with stabbing knives of
    faded expectation,
    I will only dream of the cream whites
    of your eyes, the lines folding under
    your eye lids,
    and the blinding promise of a new day
    I found in them.


    comment puh lease.​
     
  2. TiedyeDreams

    TiedyeDreams Member

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    oh wow.

    all of these were so good. I really really loved them.
     
  3. OneUndone

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    I enjoyed the second one the most. The other two spoke to me as well, but the second one I could relate to. Good work, post more.
     

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