Blossom, Depart

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Burn, Oct 12, 2004.

  1. Burn

    Burn Member

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    I saw her there,
    Standing in all the beauty of the world.
    She passed me by like the seasons,
    and I knew,
    that one day, every flower would fall pieces.

    ascend in beauty,
    descend in grace.
    in the end,
    timeless love is all but in our place.
     
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

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    I like the idea of timeless love and hope to find it someday. Wonder if I'll recognize it!
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Fleeting and ephemeral, you say so much on love, loss and life with but a few stanzas. Thank you for sharing this.
     
  4. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    I like your comparison here, seasons, parished blossoms, and love. All very meloncholy in that first stanza. Yet the second one does offer rays of hope.
     
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