random poem # 304

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tigerbeam, Oct 3, 2004.

  1. Tigerbeam

    Tigerbeam Member

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    I weep for those
    that cut off their ears
    and speak through a loudspeeker
    "I AM ENLIGHTENTED!"
    but i dare not correct them
    for fear of becoming them.
     
  2. kidder

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    Hey, it's a wry little comment on hypocrisy. Like that. Just watch the spelling. You're tromping on your own foot in this one.
     
  3. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    mmm..I like this.,..dunno why...yet..laters....
     
  4. Crayon

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    I absolutely love this poem...


    ..it made me giggle and want to hug you
     
  5. Tigerbeam

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    woops, i completely forgot to proofread it, thanks for pointing that out

    ... screw it im too lazy.... anyone want to proofread it for me? its only a few lines long...
     
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