its not over till your underground

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by x3oh4riotX, Oct 13, 2004.

  1. x3oh4riotX

    x3oh4riotX Member

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    for some reason
    i always think
    that the headlights in my rearview mirror
    are you
    coming to do something crazy
    like make me cry
    or say you are sorry
    or maybe even make me bleed.

    i always think you are there
    lurking in the shadows
    waiting for the perfect moment
    to jump out
    and tear my heart out of my chest.

    maybe its the way you said goodbye
    with your lips curled up
    in that evil grin
    shaking your head
    saying that i was never worth it.

    maybe its the way you looked at me
    that instant that i saw
    hatred pouring from your eyes
    and anger
    in your balled up fists.

    this fear i have
    inside my head
    will never die
    never go away
    until your underground..
     
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

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    Sounds like your ex was one crazy dude! Why does poison always titillate? Now, it's time to do a Doctor Phil- bring some closure. Write a poem of retribution- be the victimizer.
     
  3. ladygodivasoperation

    ladygodivasoperation Member

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    I like it! To the point!
    keep writing!
     
  4. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    you've done a great job capturing the dark side some of us have witnessed in others; I can relate to this one easily! the wrongful rage, the inflicted wounds; that someone we had such strong feelings for can turn into a Mr. Hyde is a painful and unfortunate experience. Thanks for sharing this... I look forward to more from you!
     
  5. Icurus

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    But don't forget to check the road in front of you at times,
    you may miss a new beginning, you my miss me.........

    This was a great example of inspiration Addie, loved it!
    Devon Knight / Icurus ~
     
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