my poem

i just wrote this about 20 seconds ago. its not much but it meant something to my tangled mind. just thought i would share.


Existance

Two life forces collide,
Bang! Energy!
Chaos in a ruled world.
Sparks will fly
and tides will turn
and something will soon mean everything.

 

I like this poem, says alot in little words. Awesome.

 

I like it as well, very comunicative.

 

i like teh last line, it says so much

 

short and sweet

 

thanks guys