one of us

Discussion in 'Introduce Yourself!' started by nycboy, Nov 30, 2008.

  1. nycboy

    nycboy Guest

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    I am no good @ talking about myself...& quite frankly, I don't trust today's world. However, I tried to post a poem in my profile but alas was confronted with no writing room. So allow me to introduce myself via this poem that works as my profile:

    So you’ve peaked at my profile
    to see what you can see,
    But were alarmed
    at no name and no biography.

    You think to yourself what kind of schmuck is this?
    To write a poem. Why no creds? Is the poem even his?

    I do indeed live in the New York of City
    A wondrous land, if you love anonymity

    My writing, It is just a lobby to go
    to the pain that is apart of reality
    which is just a simple feel to flow,
    for no gain to impart, just my misery.

    For critic’s glee, give a rat’s behind,
    can’t care less of format or style
    For fault in me, where I already find,
    the critique’s insult to injury.. completely vile.

    & yes there may be self loathing there
    But walk a mile in my moccasins, need I say, 'on a dare? '

    So my friends please pay no heed
    to this coward’s shame
    to stay anonymous.

    no friends, no home, no wife…no seed,
    if you don’t know my name,
    I can pretend to be one of us.

    Latin from Manhattan.
    NYCboy
     
  2. SpacemanSpiff

    SpacemanSpiff Visitor

    Welcome to HipForums :)







    ...when you become a member..which is after 30 or so posts and a few days...you will be able to post profile visitor messages
     
  3. jimmyjoe1

    jimmyjoe1 toker Lifetime Supporter

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    Hello nycboy Welcome to the forums ,
    good to have you here , PEACE.
     

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