my fav. poem...

this was my first poem ever written, also the smallest and most simple, but out of all the poems iv ever written, this is my favorite cus i love the idea behind it and the way it makes me feel when i read it...i hope u all like it too :

LOVES FIVE SENSES​

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Love you cannot smell​

but u can sense​

Love you cannot touch​

but you can feel​

Love you cannot taste ​

but you can savor​

Love you cannot see​

but you know it's there​

Love you cannot hear​

but it's ringing in your heart.​

 

thanks for the feedback...lol its ok if u dont want to, all the better in a way cus id feel bad if i got bad feedback from it =/

 

thats a great poem.it makes u feel real nice reading it.i realy like it

 

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