Sound #3 (Or How I Ruined It)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Bhaskar, Dec 21, 2008.

  1. Bhaskar

    Bhaskar Members

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    Supple as a wish,
    the tendrils of her song
    sprinkled the sky
    like a stained glass meteor shower.

    Astors and arabesques
    splashed in puddles of copper;
    and trills of blue
    and citrus made wanton love in E flat major,
    exploding into night
    a trail of nameless colors warbling in their wake.


    I met her at the library today.
    She laughed
    and I named the colors of her eyes.

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    Note: This is a recycled, improved version of a poem I posted a few years ago.
     
  2. Kizen

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    Wow :D

    quite masterful,

    the last stanza makes a wonderful conclusion.
     
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