small poem please read

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Applespark, Oct 19, 2004.

  1. Applespark

    Applespark Ingredients:*Sugar*

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    When clouds part

    Like lips

    Sky breaths

    A new sunlight

    Births

    A Rainbow

    Captures me

    A first bloom

    Of Fall

    The mouth closes

    I open mine

    To taste
    The rain
     
  2. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Delicious piece of the sky.
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    I love tasting the rain.

    First bloom of fall... is such a beautiful image.
     
  4. Icurus

    Icurus Member

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    So sweet Applespark, how you incorporate Nature with
    Us (Humans) and why not, we're part of it as well, very nice,
    and some what passionate.
    Your old friend, Devon Knight / Icurus
     
  5. helen-maple

    helen-maple Member

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    beautiful.
    i like the simplicity.
    thank you.
     
  6. Applespark

    Applespark Ingredients:*Sugar*

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    Thanks everyone :)
     
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