Wrote it in the school bathroom, tell me what you think

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by when 2 roads meet, Oct 19, 2004.

  1. when 2 roads meet

    when 2 roads meet Member

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    Wake up my sleepy children
    from what dreams do these wicked tales hail?

    Slow down

    Take a look around you,
    What do you see?

    Stone walls and blank faces,
    an epic in progress?

    Fates finest blow halts all.
    Will you be there?
     
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

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    "An epic in progress"...that one's worth the read alone!
     
  3. helen-maple

    helen-maple Member

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    hmmm, i like it..
     
  4. dreamergirl

    dreamergirl Member

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    pretty damn good for something written in a school bathroom
     
  5. when 2 roads meet

    when 2 roads meet Member

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    Thanks, bathrooms are inspiring. . . not really but that's okay
     

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