Sounds

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Bhaskar, Jan 7, 2009.

  1. Bhaskar

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    This is a running series of short poems I have been writing with the theme of sound. I figured I'd put them all in one thread. So here goes.

    Sound #1

    Boiling water flows
    into the tea cup —

    A thousand
    Bodhisattvas chant.


    Sound #2

    34 dreamers
    shuffle down wintry streets.
    The wind can't whistle out
    our candle.
     
  2. Bhaskar

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    Supple as a wish,
    the tendrils of her song
    sprinkled the sky
    like a stained glass meteor shower.

    Astors and arabesques
    splashed in puddles of copper;
    and trills of blue
    and citrus made wanton love in E flat major,
    exploding into night,
    a trail of nameless colors warbling in their wake.


    I met her at the library today.
    She laughed
    and I named the colors of her eyes.
     
  3. neodude1212

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    I LOVE sound #3
     
  4. Bhaskar

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    Those three I have posted already. I have some new ones, I just realized I left my notebook at home. Will post a few more tomorrow.
     
  5. neodude1212

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    very original work, I look forward to it.
     
  6. Bhaskar

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    Thank you!
     
  7. Bhaskar

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    In the soft "shush"
    of orange segments coming apart,
    the world becomes silent.
    All knots are unraveled
    and the heart is freed.
     
  8. Bhaskar

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    The scratching
    of pen and paper
    making love,
    making poems.
     
  9. neodude1212

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    Thank you for finding inspiration in the smallest of places. :)
     
  10. RELAYER

    RELAYER mādhyamaka

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    Beautiful as usual Bhasking in the light :tongue:
     
  11. Bhaskar

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    Haha, thanks guys! And relayer, that's lovely picture!
     
  12. Bhaskar

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    A poet stirs his tea
    as though
    he were ringing a thousand temple bells.
     
  13. sylvanlightning

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    Delicate power, dynamic beauty,
    your sounds harmonize with texture.
     
  14. Bhaskar

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    In the sun-bathed rooftop cafe
    in Dharamsala,
    the music of the town
    are hushed, and yet heightened
    by the vastness of the Himalayan valley
    and the still, dignified presence of the mountains.

    I can hear the murmur of a soft stream of Europeans
    talking about Dzogchen.
    In the distance, a carpenter makes temples and toilets.
    A playful breeze tickles my shopping bags
    making them giggle.

    Birds whose names I do not know circle overhead,
    chanting sutras and tracing yin-yangs in the sky.
    How I would love to join them,
    gliding through the valley with anonymous wings.

    The last wisp of early morning mist
    is still clinging to the mountain's apron strings
    afraid to be carried away by the wind.

    I chew ravioli in the sunshine
    and write you poems stained with tomato sauce.
    I hope they made you smile
    like a beautiful Himalayan morning.
     
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