Never Could be....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by zeppelin545, Oct 7, 2004.

  1. zeppelin545

    zeppelin545 Member

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    Never Could Be….



    Like an angel fallen from grace she walks upon the earth

    With the loveliest face

    She weeps for naught for she has it all

    Ah how the men come entranced, by her beckoning call

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    How jealous am I, for she claims his emotions

    He who gave me all of his devotions

    Fled from me did this man

    Now forever away from me he is banned

    * * *

    I cry for his love for which I have lost

    This man who’s path I once crossed

    Now I am a memory lost to her

    For she caught his attention with her seductive allure

    * * *

    Now here I sit alone in the dark

    My heart so empty and utterly stark

    Twas that of fate that brought us apart

    Two star-crossed lovers, who never had the chance to start.

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  2. kidder

    kidder Member

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    No one likes to be dumped. You've written a strongly emotional piece here and you're hurting. But I promise you- there are brighter days ahead. And far, far better ones too! Thanks for sharing!
     
  3. psilonaut

    psilonaut Mushroom Muncher

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    Tres gothic, yea guys can be assholes ;)
     
  4. thaone0715

    thaone0715 Member

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    the sting of heartbreak...
     
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