as for now.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by x3oh4riotX, Oct 28, 2004.

  1. x3oh4riotX

    x3oh4riotX Member

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    tears
    trickle down slowly
    as i wish to god
    that your love will not fade
    that i will not turn to you someday
    and see that i am now
    ordinary
    it pains me to think
    that this might someday end
    and you will leave me
    alone
    and wanting more


    as for now
    i cant stand the fact
    that you stole my world
    so easily
    with just one look
    you turned me
    upsidedown
    and
    insideout

    the moon beams
    crash haphazardly
    through the window
    and onto your face
    slowly your fingers brush
    through my tangled hair
    my thoughts and heart race
    and i can barely keep up

    there are still more reasons why
    i love you....
     
  2. Joseph0

    Joseph0 .. . .

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  3. thaone0715

    thaone0715 Member

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    nice, i can relate
     
  4. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    excellent; that first stanza really sets this one up well, and it passionately unfolds. thanx for sharing this :)
     
  5. ghost_of_the_river

    ghost_of_the_river Member

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    two thumbs up :)
     
  6. x3oh4riotX

    x3oh4riotX Member

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    thanks!!!! :)
     
  7. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    It is in the conception of the end that we find a beginning. But No doubt these words must ring hollow to the heart beset by that most ancient curse! Ah, to be blessed...


    eMBeMLaHV! :)
     
  8. Icurus

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    Truly inspired, great piece here, an understanding that can
    only be found through loss, after gaining contentment with life,
    and knowing all to well late nights alone from the one who was to
    have meant so much, you now can't believe they'd leave you so,
    so destatute of their love, these experiences are the blue prints
    of great writers, only through living through life's comings, and goings
    can we truly express to others the pain, as well as the tremendous
    loves; tho fleeting, and you have been there, and! you have shared
    truth with us, a very good read!
    Devon Knight / Icurus ~


    Excuse any mispelling's, gotta JAM ! ")
     
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