tears trickle down slowly as i wish to god that your love will not fade that i will not turn to you someday and see that i am now ordinary it pains me to think that this might someday end and you will leave me alone and wanting more as for now i cant stand the fact that you stole my world so easily with just one look you turned me upsidedown and insideout the moon beams crash haphazardly through the window and onto your face slowly your fingers brush through my tangled hair my thoughts and heart race and i can barely keep up there are still more reasons why i love you....
excellent; that first stanza really sets this one up well, and it passionately unfolds. thanx for sharing this
It is in the conception of the end that we find a beginning. But No doubt these words must ring hollow to the heart beset by that most ancient curse! Ah, to be blessed... eMBeMLaHV!
Truly inspired, great piece here, an understanding that can only be found through loss, after gaining contentment with life, and knowing all to well late nights alone from the one who was to have meant so much, you now can't believe they'd leave you so, so destatute of their love, these experiences are the blue prints of great writers, only through living through life's comings, and goings can we truly express to others the pain, as well as the tremendous loves; tho fleeting, and you have been there, and! you have shared truth with us, a very good read! Devon Knight / Icurus ~ Excuse any mispelling's, gotta JAM ! ")