sarcastic contradictions

prana · Feb 1, 2024

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prana · Feb 1, 2024

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sylvanlightning · Mar 11, 2009

prana said:

arms felt amidst the damp arrows of misfortune
that cling to unmovable peaks
petty walls, hexagonal bird calls
watch closely the wear
we dare not go there
while pensive holes inhibit your growth
tred softly as you once were
there is no doubt greater than the choices we make
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Strong close, twisty and full of emotional imagery!

sylvanlightning · Mar 11, 2009

prana said:

this harbor dances like a solemn flame
strenuously objective thistle lined shores
makes quick use of that illicit youth
and the day wonders while you wander
freedom's gaseous silver splendor
pry gracefully from her grips
every passing sip
to soar upon the shelves you once kept home
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awesome; love this... esp. 'freedom's gaseous silver splendor'
this paints a vivid moving picture.

sylvanlightning · Mar 11, 2009

prana said:

destiny cried with the slow rising tide
still singing on the sandy shores
the bloated vagrancies of neglect
carried her soft mist upon his stilted throne
a year to the day she had drifted away
as he weathers the storms of a lost groove
and enemy stones did divide her
as other avisceral clefts came before
as a banished design in the rivers of time
he remembered her song with the albatross
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I may be wrong, yet, it feels like you have spent some time polishing this....
enjoy the detail, esp. expansive words such as: weathers, groove, avisceral, clefts, banished, remembered & albatross

prana · Feb 1, 2024

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