understandable?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Charlie the guitar guru, Mar 12, 2009.

  1. Charlie  the guitar guru

    Charlie the guitar guru Member

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    I know this forums is for poems. but I figured people who write poetry would understand this better then most musicians (they sometimes think blindly) I wrote this song when I feel deep in my own spiritualness
    and its all very complicated
    so I want to see how many people can understand what its about
    and how much of it yall can understand

    intro:
    all the animals are looking to the moon in the sky
    the birds around you are all dancing and sing you lullaby's

    the times are changing, rearanging everything you believe
    its art of life, and its beauty that you will never see


    chorus:
    but the man in the sky says, ''guy why don't you just leave me alone.
    don't break down and cry cause this life is just to be unone"


    versus:
    now the music man has the plan that he is what he believes,
    you see his face in the plains in the mountins in the seas,

    the trees are talking while your walking, figuring out who you are,
    your mind is freedom, and no matter there is no place to far,


    chorus:
    and the man in the clouds, starts to shout "this is where you begin!"
    you have proven your point, and you will never ever see the end,


    versus:
    your life has ended, wounds were mended, but you forgot who you were,
    you lost what matters, and thought the strings are what your made for

    maybe your completed, but got deleted before you could complete more,
    this life commands you and demands you to soak up on the shores


    end:
    and the man on the sand says "damn we had some great ol' times together".
    and we just sat there and tried to remember.



    (yeah I know, a lot of it isn't grammatically correct. I wasn't trying to be. think about it and tell me what it means to you if you do understand.
    theres No wrong opinion
    peace and love
    Charlie
     
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