Climbing Walls of Sorrow (My book)

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by LuisBlohkin, Mar 17, 2009.

  1. LuisBlohkin

    LuisBlohkin Member

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    Hehe nevermind ive just read over it again... wowee it was pretty shit
     
  2. natural philosophy

    natural philosophy bitchass sexual chocolate

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    you're sick.

    ...and unborn babies can't wail.
     
  3. ThreeEyedChild

    ThreeEyedChild Member

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    man, i told you to work on this before you posted it anywhere!
     
  4. heywood floyd

    heywood floyd Banned

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    Well, it's pretty nasty, but I suppose it's still kinda exciting in that way that porn is sometimes exciting. There's not much story though, and some of the spelling is atrocious. The title is terrible and must be changed. Aside from that, there's not much to say. You still need a hero, a plot, a direction... basically, you still need everything that makes a novel a novel. Good luck.
     
  5. LuisBlohkin

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    Hey its only a little bit of my book
    Yer true will fix it up cheers
    Apple Juice is that you?
    Its my first attpmpt at a book.
    Thanks for the criticism
     

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