Across the Lake

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by need_to_know, Apr 25, 2009.

  1. need_to_know

    need_to_know Member

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    Please tell me what you think!

    Across the Lake

    Have you heard the breeze in the clouds when everything is dark?
    Have you heard the way the ocean flows when no one is around?
    Can you tell me, please, if you know, the sound it seems to make,
    When everything you love to hear whistles across the lake.
    Because if you have and you know how rare every sound is by itself,
    Then come with me, and listen please, as i show you how to take,
    The little things and make them big as they whistle across the lake.
     
  2. lrkst

    lrkst Member

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    i like this alot. reminds of lynyrd skynyrds song all i can do
     
  3. need_to_know

    need_to_know Member

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    thank you very much. Your opinion means a lot to me:)
     

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