i trying to start writing songs, and would like some people's opinions on their lyrics. and any advice would be greatly apperciated. right now i just got the first verse and second part will probaly be the chorus. when i was just a young boy on the banks of the ouachita watchin the sunset and fishin with my pawpaw he had a plug of chew in and was spittin out advice tellin me how to be a man while we were hopin to get a bite he told me to love the lord be thankful for all i get live life one day at a time enjoying every minute
I think this is on it's way to being very good. Maybe work on the rhyme scheme a little bit but over all this sounds like it has a lot of potential
