They're not meant to be Love Craft-esque or anything. Just something with a good flow for the music that doesn't sound atrocious. Also, it's kind of dark but it's also good stress relief. Disillosioned and void; have we become? As our leprochy envelops the Earth Oh vacant skys, its for you we pray to come upon us in shards of broken clay Why won't you let us die! I cac see ypur vipid eyes, ajar as holes in the sky And your simper can never leave my mind. Are we dead, or just in a dream. Oh lord above, why can't you make it cease. Are they alright?
I like it! I liked the second stanza a lot... "come upon us in shards of broken clay", nice imagery. Is this song going to have a chorus to it? Or are these lyrics going to be repeated a few times?
