Don't know if this is poetry....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Menace2KS, May 8, 2009.

  1. Menace2KS

    Menace2KS Member

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    but my brain told my hand to transcribe this on a piece of paper earlier and I thought I'd share it with you.

    Lucy and Mary please set me free.
    Tell me who I am supposed to be.
    Enlighten my mind with the acid and kind,
    take me to a place where time doesn't exist.
    Fill my brain with that beautiful mist,
    of thoughts and illusion.
    Be patient, she'll be back.
    Take part in the fusion of LSD and THC.
    Lucy and Mary please set me free.
     
  2. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    you rolled out the red carpet with this piece.

    what's left is to now walk down it.
     
  3. Menace2KS

    Menace2KS Member

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    Do you think it's good? That is actually the first poem I've written on my own and not for school. Goddamn system had me hating such and beautiful art form....
     

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