Bloodthirsty

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by stonedmonkiwana, Nov 4, 2004.

  1. stonedmonkiwana

    stonedmonkiwana K9 Handler

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    This poem is kind of a war protest poem... war is bad.
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    Bloodthirsty Men

    A bloody aggression
    followed by a funeral procession
    Why do we have to initiate the transgression?

    What's with all the wars we wage?
    Why so anxious to pick up a gun and go on a rampage?

    People so quick to kill
    No reguard for the blood that is spilled
    A bloody battle cry is heard
    Millions to be slaughtered just because he said the word

    Bloodthirsty men destroying peoples lives
    Bloodthirsty men raping other mens wives
    Bloodthirsty men doing the world an injustice
    Bloodthirsty men running a bloody circus

    When will we destroy ourselves?
    With nuclear weapons and bullets on the shelves
    Total destruction of mankind
    How could men of been so blind?

    A bloody war has just begun
    No one can reverse the damage that has been done
    How can one side be right when we're all so wrong?
    Why can't we all just get along?

    Bloodthirsty men
    killing young women
    ending the lives of innocent children
    Bloodthirsty Men
     
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

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    We live in a world of bloodthirsty men, bloodthirsty women and bloodthirsty children. I've never been to war but I've witnessed some brutal street fights and all those calling for blood were younger than I. Had they learned from it from their moms and pops or the media? No. It was innate.
     
  3. x3oh4riotX

    x3oh4riotX Member

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    "It is the soldier not the reporter
    that gives us the freedom of press
    It is the soldier not the poet
    that gives us the freedom of speech
    It is the soldier not the campus organizer
    who has given us the freedom to demonstrate
    It is the soldier
    Who salutes the flag
    Who serves beneath the flag
    And whos coffin is draped by the flag
    Who allows the protestor to burn the flag"


    i know you are entitled to your opinion, but you must remember that there are amazing men and women out there fighting to the death to defend your right to have that opinion. people are dying to let you have your freedom. dont hate the soldier who fights for you, hate the person that made him do it.

     
  4. stonedmonkiwana

    stonedmonkiwana K9 Handler

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    maybe I should've said this at the begining, but I thought people would realize that I was only referring to the bad soldiers, the ones who do the things I mentioned in my poem. I know there are good soldiers... My poem was just about the bad bloodthirsty ones. Thanx.
     
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