Some of my drawings, any advice?

http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs45/i/2009/130/b/e/Somewhat_disturbed_by_overyouimstanding.jpg

Any advice on improving other then sloppyness?

 

practice?

 

I really like the first one, reminds me of dropping food coloring into water and watching it spread. the color pallet is great. the only way someone becomes a professional is practice, practice practice.

 

ummmm.. no advice from me really.. i love them.. psychedelic to me.. keeep drawing and create what makes YOU feel good when you look or imagine it..

 

I noticed you blended some of your colors. I would consider doing more blending and work with more values. That will add depth to your compositions. Other than that, they look nice, good work.

 

wow, I really like those. you should put the first one on a t-shirt.

 

these are absolutely amazing they must have taken you FOREVER to finish!!

 

Thanks, i do them during class so it passes time

 

Very nice drawings! The first one is my fav. I like how detailed it is...
Maybe you could try some other color combinations? Something in green, perhaps?

I also enjoyed your photography works on deviantArt!

 

Beautiful!

 

I love those. I think just plain practice is going to make you better.

 

I too like the first one best. Like you already said, just a smidge sloppy, cleaned up that first one could be SICK

 

The first one is the best, i think it benifits from having that colorful form isolated in the stark white field. Best composition out of them, imo. I love love love the rediculous amount of color in all of them!

 

this looks like something out of beatles music videos?

nice work, but not to OG...

 

LOVE the first one...very intricate design

 

i just looked at them again now that I'm high, saw them sober when you originally posted. The third one has such depth to it now that I'm stoned lol, like it looks 3d almost, different layers too it. lol

 

sell them
i would buy all of them

 

The 2nd is my favorite, but they all are fucking awesom.