Ra's Last Stand A shining obelisk-- starward, weighty tomb-- shadow down Earth’s core A sky curved aura-- whispered across the poles scored out the earth slow A flooded realm-- sedimental bath of bones resined on the last shore Mystic tongue erased-- fused extinct melted in the sun’s wake
Well....it's about the belief that some subscribe to that the ancient Egyptians were from another world.....so it's describing what it might have been like if an Egyptian God landed on Earth as a space traveler.
beautiful...id like to see you pound this explanation into the original. to be honest, without this explanation, i had no clue.
I guess it is a bit abstract...although I had hoped the language would allude to it....shiny obelisk, etc. Thanks for the comments
