critique?

did this awhile ago, tell me what you think?

 

WOW. LOVE. Probably one of the best pieces I have seen on this site.

 

thank you!
i love it, quite a lot, one of my 'babies'.

 

trust me, I know what you mean

 

it seems u hurried the twist in the spiral near the middle... haha, i think its great though... what was on ur mind when u started it?

 

thanks for the little critique!
i see what you mean with rushing the twist.



well i needed something to do for a pen and ink project, and i loook through magezines for ideas sometimes. i found the hardwood floor twist thing in a add. the tree and the stars symbolize nature taking over.

 

That's awesome.

 

The only thing a bit jarring for me (but it is a very good piece, I love it) is the lack of texture towards the foreground of the picture in the floor. Everything else has a lot of texture except for a lot of the flooring, and it makes it seem very "white", but this could be just because I am not seeing it in person.

 

actually my teacher said the same thing, i just got too lazy to add texture.

thank you!

 

thank you!

 

haha I didn't take 4 years of art for nothing.
But it is very good, great job. You should post up some more things you have done, would love to see them.

 

i think its awesome

 

I love it. its so trippy, amazing, and I like the simplicity in it too.

 

well i havent taken pictures of any recent stuff(which i need to do, to keep everything updated, bah!), but some stuff from the last six months and before are posted here: www.sincerelyciara.deviantart.com

if you wanna tell me what you think about some of the stuff, just comment in this thread, enjoy!

p.s. will have recent stuff up soon enough haha

 

thanks! i like how simple it is too.

 

thank you!

pretty cool sig there.

 

I really enjoy the symbolism

good work

 

thanks...its just a bunch of shot of me when i was high playing with the shutter speed and the flash sync...started out as doing a self portrait haha the fun the being a photo major lol

 

wow, this is way rad, such a cool idea-the only thing i could think of to change about it would be the foreground-it just lacks interest i guess. but this could be taken care of so easily by some cropping. I really dig this!

 

i like. very nice. props!