Vent

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Therese Aline, May 17, 2009.

  1. Therese Aline

    Therese Aline Slave to the man

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    Vent

    You did this to me, you asshole, you cad
    Now who has to pick up the pieces? You damaged me, Dad

    But I'm the one that's evil, I'm a person that's bad
    Not you who hurt and harmed every child that you had

    I put on a smile and try not to be sad
    Play nice, forget. Oh me? I'm not mad

    Uncertainty, worthlessness
    In these I am clad
    Bitterness, incompetence
    These also add

    What's it like to feel valued, respected? Who knows?
    What is confidence, what are social skills? I am naked if these are clothes

    You never hit me, I never received blows
    Just cutting words, like comparing me to hos

    You don't say such things to your daughter, but I guess that's just how it goes
    Perhaps parents aren't meant to be friends, only foes

    Too much hurt, my emotions froze
    I reap what he sows














     
  2. oneomegaman

    oneomegaman Member

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    Lots of emotion in that poem
    Have you had a chance to resolve any of these feeling with your dad? Do you even want to?

    P.S. I like that you spelled hos without an e, I've never heard anyone accuse someone else of being a gardening tool.
     
  3. Therese Aline

    Therese Aline Slave to the man

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    No, we're beyond that.
    Lol, I meant ho as in tramp.
     
  4. oneomegaman

    oneomegaman Member

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    know what you meant with ho, sorry I didn't explain myself well, in that people who call people "hoes" are calling people gardening tools, but don't realize it, but you spelled it corretly.

    Well I hope being beyond those issues with your dad resulted in some resolution for you, or at least the ability to move on.
     

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