Victim

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by April90, Jul 17, 2009.

  1. April90

    April90 Member

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    You wake up at six: intercourse with your spouse.
    You're under the blanket with tightly shut eyes.
    At seven a postman arrives to your house
    With two printed portions of scandals and lies.

    You turn the TV on. Your damn daily dose
    Of lies is exceeded with fresh morning news.
    You firmly believe global changes are close -
    You have no idea they've hidden the truth.

    In life you've achieved less than nothing, you're poor
    Though you were the best both at college and school.
    Well, man, who are you? You are not even sure.
    In fact, you're a pawn in the game of a fool.
     
  2. fricknfrack

    fricknfrack Member

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    nicely written!!
     
  3. caliente

    caliente Senior Member

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    You write very well.

    Can you address a larger theme?
     
  4. April90

    April90 Member

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    Thanks for the responses!
    Caliente, what do you mean?
     

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