Mr. Blue Eyes

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by skyfire, Nov 10, 2004.

  1. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    i see you
    but i pretend not to
    you surprise me
    with a hand on my waist to dance
    i want you to hold me close
    and i dance on you
    like i know you would want me to...

    then i put my feelings in a little box
    and hide them under the bed
    i dont think it's a coincidence
    that your eyes match mine
    how can i tell you i want you
    except with a hug
    and a little kiss?

    you wonder what i'm going to do
    but i cant remember if i was going
    or if i decided to stay.

    if i stayed...
    would you dance with me awhile?
    and hold me close?
    and take me home?

    (and, oh yeah - i'm desperate for you)
     
  2. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    yeah..ok...i know.....not the best from me, and prolly a bit cliche...but it was there...so i wrote it down......u know how that goes...
     
  3. see in blonde

    see in blonde Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    wehre are girls like that in my world?
     
  4. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    oh...i'm sure they're around...just pay attention to the little things.....
     
  5. RainyDayHype

    RainyDayHype flower power Lifetime Supporter

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    I enjoyed reading this! :) The lines 'I dont think it's a coincidence
    that your eyes match mine' struck me as beautiful. It made me think of two people in love, gazing into each others eyes...
     
  6. StickyPoohy

    StickyPoohy Member

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    ..now THAT'S poetry!!!:)


    S
     
  7. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    {how we will dance with the one who stays....}

    this is lovely ,how you write such emotions in mind.....and heart,


    to want someone ,who views the same in life in dancing.....



    love n peace from saff....
     
  8. skyfire

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    thanks to u all...
     

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