A random epitaph

A passing thought,
my mind afloat.
A flying high,
up in the sky,
It had to die.
Goodbye.
Farewell.
My <3,
skips a beat.
Torn apart,
like a piece of wheat.

That's all I wrote, did you like it?

 

Beautiful. It sums it all up.

 

Thanks.

I think I need to rewrite the last line though.

Do you know any other words that rhyme with 'wheat'?

 

Seat?
Meat?
Deed?
Need?
Speed?
1337?
Freed?
Heed?
Greed?

Etc.

 

very much

 

Like a piece of one three three seven?

 

it needs more...

how about....like a swipe from reep....for the last line

i think it would sum up death pretty good...imo

good luck

 

Like a piece of Aaaaaaaahhhhhhh skeet skeet motherfucker-goddamn ...

that's all i got

 

A passing thought,
my mind afloat.
A flying high,
up in the sky,
It had to die.
Goodbye.
Farewell.
My <3,
skips a beat.
Torn apart,
like a piece of wheat.

blown away
this final day
another memory
gone astray.

(I feel awkward offering this and hope not to offend) - Dale

 

My <3,
skips a beat.
Torn apart,
like the child whose mother left him for the streets.

 

Not at all. Keep it running. Make it cheesey.