flows very gracefully and naturally, as though the writing itself was part of the natural order of things
very beautiful poem, i can picture vividly what you write. i beleive ive just found some inspiration for myself to write again, been a long time. makes me kind of dreamy, in a beautiful state of mind.
"the sun soft and buttery on my belly" what an awesome line...this whole poem is just that, a poem, something that is sadly lacking on a poetry forum...your other works are the same, poetry, nothing but... keep posting...
