School

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LostOne, Sep 18, 2009.

  1. LostOne

    LostOne Member

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    sit quiet, look, pay attention,
    don't think, we will give you thoughts,
    a mind, wild and free on the verge of being tamed,
    rebels, bucks and screams it's independence,
    This harness, Why?
    these masters, this torture, the sorrow
    of a dieing soul.
     
  2. johnnykap

    johnnykap Member

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    I like it. You've captured the pain we all remember so well. They tried to turn us into sheep, but we outsmarted them.
     
  3. i_got_life22

    i_got_life22 Member

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    yes! i love this :)
    this brings up so many memories of old times in middle school.. i'm only a freshman in college this year but back in the day i was SUCH a rebel.
    this is brilliant!
     

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