Bus Station Soliloquy

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by does2, Sep 28, 2009.

  1. does2

    does2 Member

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    So many bored faces.
    All desperate and scary.
    Here, there, to footstep places.
    Every pair eyes fidgety and staring.
    An array, different colors of suitcases.
    Fear? The price for this is faring.
    Nothing like familiar pace.
    Here, there is no caring.
     
  2. †ù®Ké¥ š†ûƒƒïñg

    †ù®Ké¥ š†ûƒƒïñg Eminent Herbalist

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  3. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    yeah, good one brah
     
  4. does2

    does2 Member

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    Thank you.
     
  5. *kushbaby*

    *kushbaby* Member

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    does i remember your ballin thread about opiates with all the epic poems i
     
  6. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    wow, very excellent. it has such a clear message and its flow is perfect imo.
     
  7. does2

    does2 Member

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    Thank you very much, respect from you is not expressible.
     
  8. weeattoes

    weeattoes what will be, will be

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    dude nick you write really weell.
     
  9. letmeSleep

    letmeSleep Member

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    yeah, I like this dude, reminds me of waiting for the bus in the rain during college.
     
  10. does2

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    Sequel:

    Cold and tired.
    Hungry.
    This demise I conspired.
    Stuck.
    It's because of me.
    And my demons.
    Crude.
    No place to shift blame.
    Nobody to lend a hand.
    Closing time, it's cold.
    Dancing to a distant drum beat.
    Living with no reason.
    I should quickly fold.
    Shame.
    Isn't this why I came?
    I'm not fine.
    There is nobody to take my blame.
    Desperately begging for help.
    Help me break this frame.
     
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