Dont' read this if your day's been as shit as mine.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Spiritchalist, Oct 19, 2009.

  1. Spiritchalist

    Spiritchalist Member

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    Life is a parallel
    Do you know how i see that?
    How I can tell?
    Because when I have a birthday I have a deathday,
    when I have a bad, in turn a good day,
    when x = y then life = 1
    because that's the way it flows.

    I should sit in a room,
    do nothing at all.
    I would sit in this room,
    and in that room, i'd just sit.
    Grey walls, Grey Floor,
    uniform socks and shoes.
    I would let no flower bloom,
    for just as soon,
    weeds shouldst grow,
    and in turn, the flower's doom.

    A rollercoaster that you can't get off
    and a plane ride upside down on the wall,
    a bridge that you walk on, though a little too far,
    when 3 fathoms down you start,
    suddenly your head lights up,
    and you can feel so smart,
    and you think, this is a goddamn freefall.
     
  2. trichome22

    trichome22 Member

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    very good poem, well done.
     
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