To Madam Fog

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by chiefburningtoke, Sep 26, 2009.

  1. chiefburningtoke

    chiefburningtoke Member

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    One day he fled the grinding light,
    Before snows intricate cavalry rode,
    Upon the saddle of drives and roofs,
    Calming survivals inflammatory plight.

    No star of love no Bethlehem,
    To pack or stuff the void of breast,
    No mad contradictory creeds,
    No dumb choir wrecking a hymn.

    All futures bleed clairvoyant lies,
    Many prophets are ghost written,
    Fates circuitous algebra,
    White scarves of ink upon black skies.

    In days night the pounding red fist,
    Knocks out poems to Misses Mist.
     
  2. AnneL

    AnneL Member

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    This one speaks to me in a way that I cannot explain! Isn't that what good poetry is all about? : D
     
  3. chiefburningtoke

    chiefburningtoke Member

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    I think so...But remember-schizophrenics here voices inside their heads that they cant explain-everything must be qualified
     
  4. AnneL

    AnneL Member

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    Hmmm... that is true! So, I will say I identify with the struggle, and the disillusionment with man-made dogma.
     

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