An attempt at expression

To touch and be near with eyes closed.
To love and be yours.
Safety in your confidence.
Trust and it's prominence.
Shared interests, it may endure.
Innocent, angelic and pure.

Holding hands out enjoying the day.
Before dinner we'd wrestle and intimately play.
Cuddling, twisting you hair by a fire.
Anxious and nervous, special words fringing on the wire.
I'd commit to your happiness,
Abolish your sadness.
Days spent in romance.
I'm scared I have no chance.

 

I'd say that was a pretty successful attempt.

 

Thank you

 

cool..

 

That means a lot coming from you, I mean shit... you didn't ridicule me

 

very nice

 

I like to see the romantic side of you, nick.

it was very moving and warm

and everyone has a chance

 

nick that was so beautiful....
It reminds me of the things you told me about hher.