Tentatively I Don't Know

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by StoneyCrustyBabe, Nov 17, 2004.

  1. StoneyCrustyBabe

    StoneyCrustyBabe Member

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    Transitions
    Ripping through me
    New positions
    Tripping up my reality
    I can't play this game
    Always the same
    These ears ring with words
    That once only believed
    That peace was the right thing
    Now I don't know
    I'm scambbled up you see
    Caught in the snare
    When all I ever wanted
    To be was aware
    Of all that life had to offer
    But my psyche won't let me
    It's too easy to be
    Drawn in by the illusion of power
    Oh but that golden calf
    Is too short lived
    To be worth anything much really
    I just want my piece of the pie
    I'm just tired
    Of trying to claw and scratch
    My way somewhere
    And for what?
    White picket fences
    On the perfect street
    The nice car
    Some big house on a hill
    Don't forget the
    Husband and child to match
    Oh wouldn't that be a nice catch
    See, see materialism even effects me
    That capitalist bullshit
    Egging me on
    Driving and pulling
    On my ideals
    Blowing up the heart
    Helping me forget that
    I ever was a part of
    Something larger
    Greater even than
    All that I ever thought
    Life could be
    So here I sit
    On a cold park bench
    Trying to let go
    Of the fact that
    I'm too analytical
    That always just turns
    Into thought that
    Become apocalyptical
    My soul screams
    I ignore it fully
    Wishing that I can make
    Something of the girlish dreams
    I once held in such high esteem
    Its hard when life makes you jaded
    When you wake up
    And realize one morning
    That the pretty picture
    Highschool citizenship painted
    Is just propaganda
    Fed to you by
    A gluttonous institution
    That doesn't even deign
    To give a shit
    Whethere or not you
    Starve to death
    Or actually try to rise
    Because we're all in this together
    One strong voice is all that's needed
    To give a purpose
    To a generation
    That's tired of the lies
    We're told to eat
    We need to stop fighting with each other
    Maybe try to hold the hands
    Of our sisters and brothers
    Yeah, I know that sounds trite
    But I am so so tired
    Of all the spite
    I see around me each day
    Conflict resolution is easy
    Just let go
    For a minute forget that
    You are an I
    And really try to open your eyes
    That's what they want
    To keep us secular
    That me mine mentality
    Is their doing
    Makes control a lot easier
    If we start thinking
    Of the survival of our species
    Instead of fucking ourselves
    And every other species
    On this planet
    We may actually begin
    To turn around what
    The past century or so
    Has ruined
    And wouldn't that be nice
    Some utopian dream
    We can all realize
    So wake up
    Make your opinions heard
    And don't try to get
    Lost in some kind of fantasy
    Of being rich and having it all
    Because under this current regime
    The only thing that matters
    Is that the rich don't fall
    Prey to us the working poor
    You get it?
    They don't want to share
    Zip, nothing, nada
    We have to try and take back
    All the dignity that
    Has been stripped, torn, and stolen
    From us
    Or else I don't know
    Maybe the hope of millions
    Waiting for some kind of change
    Is futile
    Which is just as much bullshit
    As the rest of this
    Waiting is nothing but cowardice
    Because it's easier to let your
    T.V. live your life for you
    Rather than getting
    Your ass up off
    That couch
    And trying to actually
    Make change real.
     
  2. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    What fantastic flow, full of powerful thoughts. Excellent use of rhyme as well, and I share your desire to motivate the masses! Thanks for sharing this, it was quite well done, and I'll be looking forward to more from you :)
     
  3. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    Thy mind is an engine, thy heart is its fuel, thy body the vehicle. But what drives this contraption? Whose hand weilds this tool? Is this Will invisible, or are we to proud to see, and live up to our own accountability?

    eMBeMLaHV! :)
     
  4. StickyPoohy

    StickyPoohy Member

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    Evolution is a slow, slow train to us humans! But...I DO SEE PROGRESS!! I think, the trick is to never let the bastards grind you down. Seems to me as though the 'spirit' of the sixties, hippies, punks, new age whatevers', is, and has always been there. Time to stop believing in the afterlife, and start believing in our own lives...NOW!!

    Great words, shared by millions, at a guess.

    S
     

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