line at a time mk2.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SelfControl, Nov 17, 2004.

  1. SelfControl

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    The last line at a time poem was kinda cool, but rather than dredge that one up again, I thought I'd start a new one. Add a new line as and when you feel like it, there's a really cool quote somewhere about how most people have only got about 10 good lines of poetry in them, but I forget who it was by or how it goes.

    Anyway, here's my needlessly obstuse contribution to history:

    The apartment smarts from sketching itself on your wrists
     
  2. kidder

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    Its walls hurt from all the girls you've kissed...

    (Hey, I like that one!)
     
  3. StickyPoohy

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    Blissed out on Shaman's piss; reindeer's remiss.



    S
     
  4. SelfControl

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    Blood and mud smear the walls in abstract crayola patterns

    (I nicked from Cpn Beefheart, bad bad bad me)
     
  5. StickyPoohy

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    HIding fat layers of your peeling love
     
  6. SelfControl

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    (bumping this thread up, just because I can!)
     
  7. saffronfrancisburnet

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    to fold the paper ,pen in hand
    lust of plenty....
    words of man
    human.......


    love n peace from saff
     

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