For You

You're image clouds my thought
It's present in everything

Before you
Life was distraught
For you
Life could be anything

Clutch my pillow and think
Where are you?
Insanity, I'm on the brink
Your voice, your touch

I need your love. What if I'm scathed...?
I want your love
And acceptance. But I'm afraid.

I wish I could properly express my feelings for her. Every attempt feels like a fail, a cliche or corny.

 

You're probably better off quoting Walt Whitman.

I kid I kid... good effort.

 

I dunno what you mean... but thanks. I feel this one really sucks compared to what I have been writing lately.

I just feel so intensely on this subject and cannot properly articulate my feelings.

Even if I wrote some prize winning piece on this girl, I would still feel it doesn't do her proper justice.

 

Damn... well I'm happy you've found someone you feel so strongly about. I also think it's pretty cool that you choose poetry to express it; I've always been a terrible poet and respect those who can write it.

Is she your girlfriend or is this more of an "admire from afar" deal?

 

My girlfriend? I wish. One day soon, I hope.

The admiration will never end.

I blame her for my recent bouts of insomnia. And shaft chaffage.

 

That one sent me for a ride on the Lolercoaster.

 

Hehehe.

 

I found this one on my comp, not sure if I posted it... but it kinda pertains to the current situation:

Where are you, I miss you... Wish you weren't
watching the clock waiting, stock taking fraud.
You do ensure. Who? Always an abstract issue with you.
Notching on the rocker debating, waiting to applaud.
I'm getting blue, poly thoughts resonating. Stop blaming? Odd.
Non stop thought, second docker waiting, paranoia. Facade?

 

chick must be really special! you shouldn't question any feelings or feel paranoid, just go for it i bet things will be great.

 

She is.

I'm kinda trying hard.

 

when you feel like this ^
that's when you know you are writing good poetry

 

don't try too hard you may stress yourself

 

Great point neo, thanks for the encouraging words.

I think it's worth it.

 

shaft chaffage- you are a true poet! this term will henceforth be entered in the Dictionary of Modern English Usage.

 

like ive told you about her......
Just keep going it'll work in the end.

your so beautiful.
Shes lucky.

 

Lovely poem. I hope someday you and her can be together and happy.

 

awwww Nick, you have the cutest feelings ever. Good luck with everything!

 

I know they both will if they work things out.. i miss you nick.

 

ass.

 

Don't get too tripped up over one girl...there are many, they are all the same.

Good Luck anyway bro.