familiar faces

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by kjhippielove88, Nov 14, 2004.

  1. kjhippielove88

    kjhippielove88 color + rhyme

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    Familiar Faces Haunt my dreams
    turning out the light has become a curse
    Dying soul silently screams
    Cringing eyes expect the worst

    with every passing second my heart skips a beat
    the difference between reality and illusion is unclear
    my sane mind is out of reach
    these Familiar Faces Feed off my fear

    sometime before morning they flee
    Deafening storms in my pass
    held in Tears become as the sea
    and Sanity finds its way back to me
     
  2. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    '..held in tears become as the sea'

    I know the feeling all too well. Emotional Scorpio here! :) Nice work, KJ.
     
  3. Rapturous Love

    Rapturous Love Member

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    "the difference between reality and illusion is unclear"
    sadly enough i know exactly what you mean...i'm some what lost right now
     
  4. StoneyCrustyBabe

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    Very poignant. This is a poem that speaks so much on the personal level, yet the feelings I am sure are universal.
     
  5. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    Ah, but do you not realize that it is your fear of the dark night, this empty soul which has been filled to the brim with the mists of memory, that stays thy hand from pulling the lever that releases the flood and washes you anew to renew the vigour that would flow through your blood? You have Strength of Will, Virtue and Skill, so apply thy Force to the Source without Remorse. You, my dear, are more than an image. Rejoice!

    eMBeMLaHV! :)
     
  6. kjhippielove88

    kjhippielove88 color + rhyme

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    thank you?
     
  7. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    your welcome? lol.

    eMBeMLaHV! :)
     
  8. thaone0715

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    very nice
     
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