rhythm

words and sounds saturate the space

creative prose flows freely

thoughts unfold to souls embrace

mind reacts quickly



One moment frozen by expression

like crystal clear smoke

forever remembered by mere impression

names carved in oak



ambitions apparent soon after

life's rhythm remains unfazed

ringing memories of recent laughter

reality of responsibility awaits



go forward with confidence and passion

for history repeats

earn respect through sincere compassion

turn the page and life completes

 

too intellectual
not poetry enough
(you asked, or did you?)

 

re;subject- it's afine line between taking the right and wrong turn- keep your eyes wide open.

 

i don't know how "history repeats" fits in- unless you are thinking of the Buddha.

 

thank you for the comments

"history repeats" was meant to represent the idea between a thoughtful self and ones mind lost in the moment

not very clear you are right, only a work in progress for the time being