The San Juan River

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by caliente, Nov 18, 2009.

  1. caliente

    caliente Senior Member

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  2. zombiewolf

    zombiewolf Senior Member

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    "...held again in wonder at the effort
    to which men will go
    to be near their gods."

    Or to escape their devils...


    ZW
     
  3. caliente

    caliente Senior Member

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    True enough. It's when you can't tell the difference that gives a person trouble.
     
  4. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    you are obsessed with the desert of amercia...the world is bigger than that.
     
  5. Zorba The Grape

    Zorba The Grape Gavagai?

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    It's not unusual for writers to have recurring themes... The desert is what she knows (it would seem) and she writes it very well.
     
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  7. caliente

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    Interesting point. I thought there needed to be some justification why light would be thrown back, or at the least, something to mediate the abruptness between catching it and throwing it.

    I also kinda liked that little gurgle in the line lengths, for some reason.
     
  8. zombiewolf

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    Oh yeah?,..... PROVE IT! :bigear:



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