War Poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Goatman88, Nov 18, 2004.

  1. Goatman88

    Goatman88 Member

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    Hey guys, sorry i havent been here in a while ive been busy with school and stuff...anyway i wrote this at about 11 pm last night as i was just laying in bed listening to music

    Alone in a room

    Thinking about the day

    Will I survive today?

    Or will we all die today?

    When will it end?



    He knows maybe someday

    He can escape away

    He can go home



    Hiving to kill

    They say it’s a thrill

    But is it?

    Killing our brothers

    Killing our own

    Until we are the

    Only ones left

    Until we are finally

    Alone



    “Its all in your mind” they say

    You’ll live to another day

    The more you fight,

    The more you kill the more you’ll say

    “This isn’t so bad, Ill live another day”



    Until you lie there on the ground

    Dying and the only sound is

    Crying-crying because youre dying and now you are

    Finally

    Alone
     
  2. Goatman88

    Goatman88 Member

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    did anybody even read it??
     
  3. Tigerbeam

    Tigerbeam Member

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    its not bad, somewhat unique style
     
  4. BlackVelvet

    BlackVelvet Members

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    hey, good poem :)
     
  5. loveflower

    loveflower Senior Member

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    what they said :)
     
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