a series of poems inspired by R.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by day_tripper77, Nov 18, 2004.

  1. day_tripper77

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    i was going through all of my poems -or at least all of them that i can find at the moment- because i'm going to write them all down in one book to make it easier to find them all.. and i was putting them in order by who/what inspired them and how important they(the poems) were to me

    anyways, these are the 4 poems that were inspired by a good friend of mine, whom for his sake I'll refer to as R. (not so sure he'd appreciate me posting his name all over the internet :D) so, i just decided to share them..

    he hasn't read them yet, but if he reads the letter i gave him earlier tonight, he'll at least know that i wrote them.. i told him that if he ever decided he wanted to read them to let me know... after reading them, do you think he'll appreciate them?

    thanks,
    - stykz -

    R.
    I taste you on my lips
    Your scent clings to my skin
    How can something feel so good
    And still be called a sin

    So wont you take me by the hand
    And lead me to temptation
    I promise not to go astray
    For you are my salvation
    ©stykz
    11 August 2004
    1:07 a.m.


    Blind
    How can I believe in someone else
    When I play mindgames with myself

    And how do I listen to what my heart has to say
    When every time my thoughts get in the way

    And how do I hide the pain in a place no one can see
    When it's obvious to everyone that this is killing me
    ©stykz
    20 August 2004
    8:15 p.m.


    (currently untitled and unfinished)
    Experience is the greatest teacher
    But it comes with the highest price
    You may learn your lesson quickly
    But you'll pay for the rest of your life.
    ©stykz
    20 August 2004
    8:29 p.m.
    (*revised 14 October 2004, 2:27 p.m.)


    Confusion
    If you dont tell me what you want
    Then I cant know how you feel
    Of if the part of you
    I'm being shown
    Is a part of you that's real

    I need someone who can guide me
    Cause right now I'm feeling so lost
    Will I end up getting
    What I think I want
    And will it be worth the cost?
    ©stykz
    17 November 2004
    7:27 p.m.
     
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