great work dude. would love to see more. you take a commonly over-done subject of poetry (generally considered 'emo') and give it a refreshingly morbid stance. some of these lines and images are worth the whole poem.
thank you both...How were your christmas and New Year...there were a dozen people over here from all over the country-it went pretty well though...
Well, now ... I'll hoist up a bottle of Jack and say "hear, hear" for this one, chiefburningtoke. You've got the gift of words, man.
