The Morning after Politics

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by chiefburningtoke, Jan 20, 2010.

  1. chiefburningtoke

    chiefburningtoke Member

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  2. knottygrl

    knottygrl Member

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    "Heart--bleed red and icy, patriot--blue
    Attain in flowing formations beyond
    birds lofty genetic scrawl,
    We must have faith we can build machines
    That are capable of being human,
    Beyond the knee-jerk chemical reactions
    Of creatures taught by history to flee the night…"

    Wayyy too powerful ! You have to get published dude. The words you fit together are unimaginable , yet they work amazingly well.
     
  3. zombiewolf

    zombiewolf Senior Member

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    Insightful cynicism...I can dig it!

    ZW
     
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    after the machine rolls/walks out of the perfectly formed human mouth, is there anything left to say/state?
     
  5. isoisidorus

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    humans fail, where machines stumble.
    the red blue and white flag, spread as a bedsheet
    provides the solution.
     

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