The stars shine for ur light, the wind blows for ur might clouds are there for ur landing,the moon has no understanding, the sun shines it has no choice, and the river flows for rejoice, take a walk and pick them flowers, im sure they have some Magical powers, is it a poem or some thing else, maby a song i could sing it i was thinking, peace and freedom
BraveSirRubin, go to hell this is a wonderful idiomatic poem i especially like the last line "take a walk and pick them flowers, im sure they have some Magical powers"
^^ Agree. It's pretty short, and not to be contrary, but I think the last line is the worst. It seems like a silly comment at the end of something that is otherwise somewhat serious. Also, what does 'flows for rejoice' mean?
like yeah i can not spell very good and i do not intenned to learn now, it was just a start i get side tracked a fair bit because other things pop into my head a i follow other paths, rejoice, its like a kind of happines, and flows like as in flow, the movement of some thing i would say, thank all you guts for the in put, ill have another ponder on it soon, peace
do learn to spell White Dove. It really isn't that difficult- just read a lot (everything except others' postings online of course). You are a poet. let us not let language fall apart otherwise everything else will follow.
evan if i did learn to spell good, most of my thoughts are not under stood because im on a difrent plane to most people and they do not see the colours and meanings in the txt all they see is what they read, kinda like skiping to the middle of a book, in my eyes, i will take one bord what you said, thank you my friend, peace
dude dont be a jerk. that was a nice poem. a really good poem infact. And the OP looks like my cousin's friend Antonio. ^_^