regarding love..

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by violetdusk, Feb 3, 2010.

  1. violetdusk

    violetdusk Member

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    important things cast aside
    everything forever,
    hidden in your mind
    i look out to try
    abandoned for so long
    you`re on a high
    not where you belong
    the white flag is black
    painted by you
    i`m not looking back
    there`s nothing i can do
    my veins scream out lie
    the anger i keep inside
    dreams are shards of glass
    only use is weapon
    offensive to the end
    your will might happen
    and truths which tend to bend
    always shall surpass
     
  2. sw0o0sh

    sw0o0sh Banned

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    I can't help but to assume you have some sort of friend who's doing drugs and won't stop and now you are feeling that burden? Sorry if I'm wrong? Nice poem though
     
  3. violetdusk

    violetdusk Member

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    nothing to do with drugs..
     
  4. sw0o0sh

    sw0o0sh Banned

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    Sweet, the stanza's seemed to vaguely capture my own friends circumstance. :|
     
  5. isoisidorus

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    nothing to do with drugs- everything to do with betrayal.
     

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