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  1. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    her bonnet casts blue upon the floor
    the baby interacts with her world
    the yellow button presses the bear out -
    bear cries
    intersecting dynamics equating revolutionary views
    monoliths approaching
    black and square -
    encroaching, the dignity of the few
    Lyn believes in the radius of her experience
    trusting with her heart, she puts forth the effort
    to tear worlds apart
    faithful pews, creaking in the absence of two
    one and two, her and truth
    organist relays beautiful cymatic renewals of
    floof, poof,
    over the pews, the chapel strains
    into the sky, cerulean blue
    again, constrains the
    death of flies who fly
    hoods pulled tight, hands held close
    grasping onto one another, everyone
    expects the choice
    clinging on, it's impossible in the wind
    green fluid resonance
    timidly sinning, even in it's end
    after all is over, Lyn lays in her bed
    and thinks about the 8th year
    during which she learned the most important
    fact, fundamental in it's eloquence, yet
    unnoticed, was too tame, she says outloud
    "accept loss forever
    and everything will be the same"
     
  2. sw0o0sh

    sw0o0sh Banned

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    aww dont Cry neo\

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  3. does2

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    Always the wordsmith.
     
  4. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    but why?
     
  5. thedope

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    Blue Birds are Beautiful.
     
  6. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    the most
     
  7. sw0o0sh

    sw0o0sh Banned

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    My grandpa once sat down next to me in a gazebo and sketched a blue jay for me when I was 4 years old. What a day. I agree.
     
  8. neodude1212

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    I never had a grandpa
    in this moment I envy you
     
  9. does2

    does2 Member

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    lols
     
  10. thedope

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    No older, non judgmental mentor?
     
  11. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    I would have killed for one
     
  12. sw0o0sh

    sw0o0sh Banned

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    Don't feel bad it's not like I needed that when I was 4 years old. I am equally screwed now, as far as having a non judgmental mentors go LOL
     
  13. thedope

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    The future you might say is full of opportunity. Killing might create a greater dilemma than the one you are regretting. You could ask.
     
  14. neodude1212

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    it's just an expression.
     
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