I wrote a soong...

Stooped

Enjoy! rettyplease:

 

Nice song man, shame about the quality. Need to hit it up with some decent recording software and you're well on your way!

Congrats, songwriting is a skill many great musicians flounder at. So many chose style over substance.

 

Nice song, does need to be cleaned up a bit.

 

All I have is a karaoke machine my friend left here long ago... Thanks for the comments. I'll have to buy me some supplies.

 

I think the poor sound quality kind of fits with the song; it's cool sounding.

 

I was kind of hoping so, since I don't have a band. I would prefer to play punk music... Maybe I'll try to get my no-goodnik friends to play with me. In the meantime, all I've got is me and a karaoke machine and a 2nd rate guitar.

I think I am improving. Here is another song. I don't know about that last one...I was kind of disgruntled at the time and didn't really work on it.

Conked

 

Very good, you have some talent man

 

Cool, one more. I am steadily improving...

Human Caterpillar

I redid Conked! too.

 

A few more then I'll leave you guys alone:

Someone Got Shot

Toto

There is a War (lol @ my pronunciation of "die" in this one)

Revised my first one too.

 

My online album
Servatka
Imaginary Dreamcatcher
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3FduclzDZoY"]YouTube- Servatka - Direct

I liked your song!

 

This is my thread. You're trying to make me look stupid. I won't listen to your song...I know what you're up to.

 

I dont recommend listening to his if you're like me and cant stand lazy guitar hands that schreech over the strings

 

I can stand anything...I might even like it. I am just being petty and small.

 

It sounds mysterious and it's catchy too. I have stuck my head now. Nice job man.

 

Thanks.

 

You can listen to and download my whole album Kamikaze at my website on the web:

http://www.myspace.com/andrewjvb

It's really good.