Poem I wrote bout vietnam

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by tree_beard95, Jun 4, 2010.

  1. tree_beard95

    tree_beard95 Banned

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    I had to write the poem for two voices about something from the 1960s for school. I chose the Vietnam War. Tell meh if you like it. :) I got a good grade btw.


    I am a soldier I am a former soldier

    Long time. Long time.


    Did you like the war?

    I hated being in the war.

    I think the war is right.

    The war is unnessesary.

    Every day. Every day.

    Today. Year ago.


    My best friend died. My best friend died.


    I kill communism. You kill innocent people.

    I am pro war. I protest the war.

    It all started. It all started

    Because of communism.

    Because you like to kill.
     
  2. PurpByThePound

    PurpByThePound purpetrator

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    cool man

    there is a kind of duality to the dialog. yet the dialog and who is who is kind of ambiguous.
     
  3. Zorba The Grape

    Zorba The Grape Gavagai?

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    ^ Yepp.

    I dug it, though it could use some polish.
     

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